Wednesday, 18 October 2017

100WC - Wk 6

Breaking News!
 A very mysterious man was caught robbing Ohio's largest bank they have. The man was wear a pair of cheap rubber gum boots. The police came to the scene immediately. He then went and made a run for it to attempt to get away from the situation. Next he dived into what he thought was a pond at the time, he soon discovered that is was quick sand, he squirmed back and fourth as he was being submerged. The police found his body vertical and his gum boots were untouched by the wicked sand.

Lauryn
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous22 October 2017 at 03:11

    Hey Lauryn,

    Good writing with a touch of adventure and suspense. When you write like this, short sentences build up the tension.

    From Steven Hales - Norfolk, England, UK #Team100wc

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